Coat

“Coat” a wintertime mudroom standoff, Poem 016 in a series of 365 poems written by Diana Ludwick in 2026.

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A pre-dawn glimpse of the rising winter sun, in the forest over rooftops, painting the early sky hot peach and lavender.
A pre-dawn glimpse of the rising winter sun, in the forest over rooftops, painting the early sky hot peach and lavender. Photo by Diana Ludwick (c) 2026.

Thirty degrees Fahrenheit
under freezing —and falling.
Dress accordingly,
I counsel.

Mom, Ugh! That only means they
won’t let us out at lunch
So I don’t need a coat!
She counters.

Seventh grade and
facts are farce.
Fashion over
function, forever.

In lieu of loathsome outerwear
she slips on an indignant eye roll
drapes herself in a chill of blue skin and
ventures out on foot.

Bare ankles glow as they
bob up and down in the dark, away from me.
An exposed shoulder shines like a beacon
though it fades to grey as distance grows.

Summoning greater forces
from peach-flushed forest horizon
Under breath
I invoke skyward:

May her righteousness keep her warm
Might her indignation be a hearth.